Caught in near.. does that mean? No part of your story mentioned bullets flying. You should have included dragons, we all know dragons make stories better.

Lastly.. why were you sitting outside of a walmart, are you the greeter for the garden area? There's no excuse for sitting and hanging out at a walmart, none. Oh wait.. on my role today, I have started thinking all GP owners are criminals since GP's are the choice of car for crimes. Were you going to commit a crime?