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Last edited by J_Ferguson; 04-15-2008 at 05:04 PM.
I like it. I like it a lot.
I also really like it..... This is part of my job "QA" isn't it supposed to say crowd, or did you really mean croud.
Last edited by J_Ferguson; 04-15-2008 at 05:04 PM.
I like it!
can I put it up on my myspace, if you dont mind?
I love it! and ur gp looks awsome!!
I like it, and it can be used year round.
The ending...I don't know...just ends in tail lights...sounds good, but doesn't go with the flow of the rest of the poem. The other wise comments are creative, and cool cause we can relate, but not see it coming when you read it. Tail lights...I guess has been over played maybe.
Not bashing, I love it!
I might print that off and hang it up in my garage.
~F~
Or you could add to it and this could turn into a very interesting thread..
Thanks for the comments all
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